As you published it also on Quaddicted it seems that this is not beta but a completed map. If it is so, you need to submit a news thread with the same text as your message and wait. It is the button at the bottom of https://www.celephais.net/board/forum.php

I will see to find some time to play it. 

Ah Ok. Thanks. I'm just trying to ”fail fast, learn fast” and get some feedback so I can improve my map making skills 

Hey all!

I'm looking for some feedback on my upcoming map if anyone feels up to it!

Here are some screenies (images might look fuzzy for a couple of seconds...OneDrive does a quick load and then does the highres load in the background):
https://1drv.ms/u/s!AoR-AHsUdeQDi4dP6o8H-Ju0WG2Cig?e=yOjL5h
https://1drv.ms/u/s!AoR-AHsUdeQDi4dOsF01uFNgnDykFA?e=sdm1Nk
https://1drv.ms/u/s!AoR-AHsUdeQDi4dLd4tncTf5IsJIMA?e=wODcZd
https://1drv.ms/u/s!AoR-AHsUdeQDi4dK0nJag4FBArOQtQ?e=FZY2sJ
https://1drv.ms/u/s!AoR-AHsUdeQDi4dJEinzgzDdvfF5UQ?e=qD2QqT
https://1drv.ms/u/s!AoR-AHsUdeQDi4dH6qSroLD44tTkgw?e=p2Rwc1
https://1drv.ms/u/s!AoR-AHsUdeQDi4dF6BQqgiO2Per1kA?e=lnvd6l
https://1drv.ms/u/s!AoR-AHsUdeQDi4dIrwh7Em38OiJFBw?e=eyW6s6
https://1drv.ms/u/s!AoR-AHsUdeQDi4dG0D7Z4M3I-vcpVg?e=CwZf0u

And here's the zip file:
https://1drv.ms/u/s!AoR-AHsUdeQDi4dCEH9JM5CEhmBqmQ?e=MaUQNj

I haven't done an optimization pass like func_detail or anything like that yet. It's designed with the Hard difficulty in mind, but I did do a easy and normal pass...just not incredibly well-tuned on that front yet. Also no DM spawn points.
Any feedback welcome! Thanks! 

Need a place to host your screenshots? Upload them here:
http://www.quaketastic.com/ 

Seriously guys use Quaketastic... some of these links are ropey af 

I am having issues in getting the map's link to work, as it is in a perpetual loop. 

I clicked on one of those and it logged me into a "one drive" account that I had no idea I even fucking had.

Seconding the "just use quaketastic" chaps. 

Some tips for when you finish up your map:

https://youtu.be/eQ911Wphy0Q

https://youtu.be/C-NGjpa8iYM 

I've never had an issue with OneDrive before, so sorry for the runaround. Here's the quaketastic links:
http://www.quaketastic.com/files/screen_shots/ToB_ZQ_01.png
http://www.quaketastic.com/files/screen_shots/ToB_ZQ_02.png
http://www.quaketastic.com/files/screen_shots/ToB_ZQ_03.png
http://www.quaketastic.com/files/screen_shots/ToB_ZQ_04.png
http://www.quaketastic.com/files/screen_shots/ToB_ZQ_05.png
http://www.quaketastic.com/files/screen_shots/ToB_ZQ_06.png
http://www.quaketastic.com/files/screen_shots/ToB_ZQ_07.png
http://www.quaketastic.com/files/screen_shots/ToB_ZQ_08.png
http://www.quaketastic.com/files/screen_shots/ToB_ZQ_09.png

And here's the pre-release of the map:
http://www.quaketastic.com/files/demos/ToB_prerelease.zip

Is there a way to remove files from quaketastic? I couldn't find anything other than the upload options when logging in via browser. I realized I started putting things in the root directory instead of the screen_shots one and don't want there to be a bunch of junk files in there.

Thanks dumptruck_ds for the links! I'll follow them to the tee when it's ready to go prime time.

Thanks again, all! 

manticorn 

groovy 

I will return my mortal combats to you. 

Looks great madfox 

Never could end that mod decently. I'm just a normal skill player and the nightmare setting didn't fit my joy at all. Good maps, I won't deny.

Afterall it's more than fair to see a Ranger killed after three shots, while nightmare skill offers the equal combat. 

A bit of husslin', but I finaly managed to get a decent base file for the thing. Thank Dr. Rigormortis for the start frame. It must have been quiet a job to combine a Chtong with an OldOne and some basic joints.

zerstörer 

Just finished the manticore model. Original it comes from the turbosquid site as a label model, but I got so fixated with it that I made it a quake model 

I've started a new map, based around the idea of having - well - fire, water and places where you can get squished:

https://www.gorgs.org/2020/11/06/re-opening/

There are some more subsequent blog posts, but the map is still work in progress. Feel free to have a look at it and let me know what you think! 

That engine and hud literally makes my eyes vomit actual bile over my monitor and keyboard.

Also just direct link the images rather than having to have two clicks to open each one.

Map looks like an okay start tho. 

Welcome to Quake mapping.

I think you should be using a engine and textures which looks closer to how Quake is if you want to be sure the player is going to see and experience the same as you and issues do not arise. It also makes easier for us to tell you things as right now is hard to know. I am under the impression there is something wrong on the brushes on the upper part of the third screenshot but as i said before is hard to tell. 

 

Made some changes to the DarkYoung,
now it looks more like a HL squeeker.
Strange carrot afterall..,

Alruin 

but i think it would be better for the red parts on the outside of the mouth to be less red, or make a degradation. Looks a bit like painted. 

Yes, they were a bit explit.
Made a new version that has a more savage look.

This one got entitled as "the buthole of shubnigar". 

The new version is beautiful! I love the teeth's color! 

Captured Shambler's ToothFairy.