I already played your map. It's a cool one, I love it. Thanks! 

It's kinda very close to Sock style and properly done. Though, i had shortage of health sometimes, probably i had to play more carefully. Anyway, very good start in Quake mapping! 

Hello, for now many thanks to @metlslime for his help. Thanks

Due to some suggestions that the first weapon was poorly visible, here is a link to a small update.

Download:
https://www.quaketastic.com/files/vanisch011.zip 

- Light unit for the first weapon
- Removed ammo for lightning gun

Download:
https://www.quaketastic.com/files/vanisch012.zip 

Nice little map. For a first release it's very good.

Texturing is great, details everywhere. But a bit cramped, but not necessarily in a bad way.

Some areas look almost like a real place, but some do not fit well with the entire map, but I guess it adds to the Quake charm.

Secrets were really bad, don't take it as an offense, but they were way too obvious and they didn't felt at all as secrets.

I hope you'll make another maps, this one is VERY promising, try to make the second one bigger and add more challenging secrets.