i can't see anything... 

...were you going to send me the level? 

I sended the level, but got a mail-error.
rar-format wasn't available.

I'll try a zip-format, but as the bsp is 2.5Mb
it will be a grunt in your pillarbox. 

...neither a grunt nor a wimper. I'll give it a look this evening. 

Here's one from UnderWorld, but then the title already excisted...

http://members.home.nl/gimli/Quake03.jpg

Am I exiled now? 

but your brushwork is certainly improving over your previous maps.

still not a fan of the purple bricks, but that's minor. 

Hello,
I've enlarged my previous screenshots... If somone wants to take a look... It's a little bit dark again but it looks better than yesterday..
Enjoy !!! 

I forgot to give the url... sorry

http://lambert.jeanhilippe.free.fr

... 

I need to get off my mitten...

http://lambert.jeanphilippe.free.fr

sorry.... 

this is better.
the map looks rather oldkool with its simplicity. i think it'd be ok map for the first try.
good luck lambert! 

still cant really see anything 

Thanks for your feedback... and for encouraging me as well !!
Sorry for for the current darkness of the map, but I think it comes from your screen settings... (try increasing brightness)....
ASAP the full BSP on-line....
Bye... 

There are several textures on the bottom-right shot that are not aligned. The checkerboard floors are especially noticeable where they meet the pillars on the left - maybe put some trim on the floor to eliminate the fractional checkerboard tiles?

And I think you could do with more light sources in the two screenshots on the right - there seems to be a large fulldark area in the middle of the room.

Also, don't fear putting big screenshots up - most people would be fine with 800x600, I'm sure. 

Yes I've noticed that too, I'm currently working on texture alignements.... these screenshots are only preview, and I hope to correct a max of thing before releasing this map...
Thanks for your feedback...
Bye.. 

So sad whenever JPLambert posts and ends with 'bye'. It always seems like it's his last post ever and he will never come back again :(

Bye. 

i have the same feeling
this 'bye' sounds so...uhm..fatal
but from the other side this is demonstration of proper and long forgotten etiquette ;) 

Hooray! Wait... dammit. 

..and tell eachother....

sorry, forgot to say hello. 

I made the gamma 1.80 for better vieuw
but it won't solve the texture mess.

http://members.lycos.nl/portable/newpage2.html 

Hey men !!! I'm not dead !!! It was just time for me to come back home after a hard day of work... And last evening I had a lot of mapping stuff waiting for me at home... Furthermore, we are both located in different part of the world .... Just note that my last post was done at 18:20 for me (my local hour), and it is noted at 09:21 (forum hour..)... There is "only" 9 hours of difference... Anyway...
I started yesterday to check texture alignement, and yes I found some scrappy one to correct... (Thanks LTH !!! )... I also start to build the final fight room...
I think the next step for me is to finish this map, and allowing on-line download on my web site... with brand new clear screenshots this time.....
Bye.... he he he .... 

http://www.suspenlute.com/stuff/rockyroom.jpg 

looks ok, but the ceiling is a bit flat. you could try making some sort of dome-ish structure on top of it with the same trisoup method? 

actually is made of triangles but I didn't do much with them because WC is gay. I'll make it a little more warped though :) 

I think the whole rocky appearance would look loads better if you used a better rock texture, I recommend looking at the Rune.wad texture set (from rune the game) it has some awesome rock textures in it, check the wad thread here im sure it'll be in there somewhere. 

I wondered if my Lycos site connects, because I didn't get much respond on the load of screenshots I uploaded in post#742 & #728

What would you think of Q1-models like...

http://members.lycos.nl/portable/newpage3.html