look nice :| danw my English 

Yea the lightning hasn't really been touched since it was just a box layout so it's a bit shit :E 

second shot looks ok, but a little boxy. if you pulled the top edge of some of the brushes inwards to create sloping walls might help.
i like that you're spending some time on the trim. :) 

... keep it up ! 

"if you pulled the top edge of some of the brushes inwards to create sloping walls might help. "

http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/9418/zqftest03construction7.jpg

That kind of what you meant? :E

Also couple more goes at corridors :p

http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/5554/zqftest03construction8.jpg

http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/5059/zqftest03construction6.jpg 

 

only thing i'd suggest from those latest shots is not alternating between red & blue lights too much. it's cool having both, but separated a bit (eg. a 'red wing' & 'blue wing' maybe) or denoting stages of the map, like changing colour after a key door or something 

hmm, hadn't thought of that :E 

interested in seeing this :) 

 

What? 

 

Nope. 

Bigger area this time. They are a real pain. It's turning out a bit square :E

http://img338.imageshack.us/img338/5723/zqftest03construction10.jpg 

Texturing of the door needs fixed - the inward facing faces need to be straightened.
Also the textures on the side of the slats on the flor need to be aligned.
Nice use of stock textures :) Map is looking nice :) 

That map is evolving big time ;)

Keep up the good work! 

Biggest problem imo is the curved roof that just looks weird to me, and the arch/support beams under the ramp. Not so hot on the computer panels, but that's ok. 

Kind of annoyed there's no monsters ;) 

thats the shit! Looking good 

Texturing of the door needs fixed

so does your grammar :P

i think the curved ceiling looks ok, not totally sold on the ramp supports though.

and i think the stairs could use some narrow trim at the edge so they don't look like stairs from below (ie. a small triangle brush on each step to make it appear as one long diagonal surface) 

I'm not a fan of those - because if the player treads on the stair part or the ramp part their movement changes.

Personally I think movement should be consistent when navigating something. 

i guess they could be made func_illusionary in that case - i was only thinking for cosmetic value 

I was bein' a wee bitty tad faeces-shus 

u r missin loadz of Caps and .Stops. 

i always get torn when doing stairs like that.

do you make the sloping trim func_illusionary and preserve the stair physics, or do you clip the whole thing and make it one big slope?

T_T (i usually opt for illusionaries)