not too enamoured with that sock, looks too cartoony to me. 

the architecture. Personally I think the roof and outside floor are the only problems. I'd choose a wooden shingles texture for the roof and maybe add some more detail to the floor by removing the odd floorboard here and there, or making them slightly crooked, or perhaps just add some darker wooden trim between the wall/floor joint to add a hint of structural realism to it. 

I like the style! I like the layered look to the architecture. 

Yep, totally agree the screenshot does have a mario/soft focus look about it, but that is partly to do with the phong shading (far too high)

I will work on the location a bit more tonight, rework the trims, add more wood and try and give the structure more detail. W post another screenshot later, thanks for the feedback. :D 

I like it. It's different instead of the same old same old. 

the outlines remind me in some strange way of the Goetheanum: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Goetheanum 

I changed the textures on roof and trim, a bitch to setup the top wall trim, too many weird angles but it does make it feel a bit better. Toned down the phong and increased the shadow map density so less jaggered/rough edges.

http://www.simonoc.com/images/design/maps_q3/moteof1bo1l.jpg (_1024 version avail)

Ive switched the floor to stone for the moment until I decide what to do with it, detail wise. The above shot is panned out alot, the player will never see that much. So here is a couple of shots from the floor at player height, the building feels different to me from the closer angle.

http://www.simonoc.com/images/design/maps_q3/moteof1bo2l.jpg (_1024 version avail)
http://www.simonoc.com/images/design/maps_q3/moteof1bo3l.jpg (_1024 version avail)

Does it still look cartoony? Roof trim, like/dislike? upper roof leave or same trim style? 

especially the close up shots.

From far away it still has that cartoony look but not as much as before.

Roof trim looks fine to me. I dont like the upper roof tile texture though. 

.. I'd really would like to have the .map to see how you made this curved corners.... 

Patches 

The angles on the outside wall just look too soft! I don't think the brickwork would naturally decay like that, if it's old; if it's new, it would be a very sharp angle. 

This thread is like tumblr for mapping -- I love it. 

the building looks much more imposing from close up. i don't know about 'cartoony' but the panned shot lacks that imposing feel.

the flared out upper part of the walls make it feel powerful when looking up at it from the ground. 

agreed 

@nitin, I will changed the texture density for the roof tiles, they are far away and look alot different from the ground.

@JPL, when the map is finished I will release all the source files, so all will be revealed soonly! (The curved corners you are looking at are brushes with a 60 phong value on them.)

@negke, the phong lighting and texture alignment/density is the illusion.

@inertia, ooo never heard of that place before :D Yeah this place is a cool mapping blog/home, lots of different people.

@necros, yeah the panned out shot was really so everyone could see the overall outline, but yeah it feels alot different up close. Most people rarely look up in games so alot of high detail will be missed. 

Most people rarely look up in games so alot of high detail will be missed.

solutions:

1. spawn in some annoying flying bad guys with low hit points

2. shootable buttons near ceiling to open doors

3. game mechanic that rewards taking photos of rare objects or creatures, requiring people to look around more

4. cutscene that takes control away from the player and shows your preferred backdrop while "plot" happens in front of it

5. a tantalizing secret item that you can see easily but can't tell how to climb up to without looking around 

I'd go with the same trim style on the upper roof. It looks unfinished to me now, with the trim on the lower.

I'm not sure if the floor texturing was just unfinished in the first shot, but I kind of liked the look of that better. In that first shot it almost looks like decking...some sort of rough-hewn planks or something. Much more interesting than that square-cut stone in the new shots. 

Get a job making drinks on the beach instead. 

I mean sock you are basically livemapping. It is awesome. 

.. just posted it to show the progress f CDA sequel :)

http://lambert.jeanphilippe.free.fr/Divers/GTH03.JPG
http://lambert.jeanphilippe.free.fr/Divers/GTH04.JPG

Top of the destroyed castle is yet finished, I hope to start next area soon :) 

That map is definite hotness! Can't wait to play it... 

go go go!!! 

zomggg i need inspiration ~:\ havent mapped for weeks... not a single brushe!

look very cool JPL, keep the good work! 

I hope any light dwells on buttom of these dark caverns. 

Can't tell, are you using minlight?