Hi Quake Mappers!

This is my first map, Brutic. I spent a month working on it. Tell me what you think.

Thanks!

Screenshots:
https://www.quaketastic.com/files/dkbrutic_1.png
https://www.quaketastic.com/files/dkbrutic_2.png
https://www.quaketastic.com/files/dkbrutic_3.png
https://www.quaketastic.com/files/dkbrutic_4.png
https://www.quaketastic.com/files/dkbrutic_5.png
https://www.quaketastic.com/files/dkbrutic_6.png
https://www.quaketastic.com/files/dkbrutic_7.png

Map:
https://www.quaketastic.com/files/dkbrutic.zip 

For a first map it is quiet an archivement.
Love the blue theme. Curves are straight.
Comes in as a real surrounding.
Only thing is that it looks a bit bland without detail, but I haven't play it. 

Not bad even for experienced mapper! I like it. 

Here are some screenshots of my first map, Planetside:

https://www.quaketastic.com/files/Planetside%201.jpg
https://www.quaketastic.com/files/Planetside%202.jpg
https://www.quaketastic.com/files/Planetside%203.jpg
https://www.quaketastic.com/files/Planetside%204.jpg
https://www.quaketastic.com/files/Planetside%205.jpg
https://www.quaketastic.com/files/Planetside%206.jpg

It's based on an idea I had of a tech-base being built around some arcane structure for the purpose of researching it.

Feel free to share any feedback, can't wait to show it once it's complete! 

Those screenshots looks like a time past. 

for a first map. I'm a bit dazzled by the texture use/placement. It helps to give the rooms a kind of unity in correspondence of each other.
A blue texture beneath a brown gives a weary effect.
Also provide entrence's a ranged interior, so they are more outstanding.

Keep on tinkering. 

@Hipshot - I had to decompress the screenshots so they could fit the quaketastic file size.

@madfox - Thanks for the feedback! I appreciate it. 

I found a Giger model on Turbosquid.
"Reqium_Corpornai"
Fuzzed it up to a Quake1 model.
The result reminds me of the Indian God Ghanesha.

https://www.quaketastic.com/files/ghanesha.gif 

I had some inspiration from Archimedes.
And made some poor zombies do the work for me.
:P

https://www.quaketastic.com/files/models/zombymob1el.gif

https://www.quaketastic.com/files/models/zombiemobiel.zip 

Love it madfox. I see the rotation is baked into the model - wonder if it might work better with the zombies running on the spot and the rotation handled in the QuakeC instead? It would minimize wobble on the solid parts of the model. 

I accidently uploaded a file of Qoole prefabs to quaketastic that was corrupted with a cabin virus.
There is no way to delete files there, is it?

Probably the download will give a warning, but it is a bad habitude. 

I made a not_shootable_entity for Quake as eyecandy.
Download is on quaketastic.

https://www.quaketastic.com/files/models/kalendrius.gif 

I really like how the wings look, the fullbright blues give the impression of the iridescent shine you get with some bird feathers.

It also makes me think how nice it would be to just have some little crows that you could deploy for atmosphere in a Quake level. Probably the simplest thing would just be to have them circle the sky in a loop, but imagine if they were a bit more interactive and took off when you got near or fired too close to them.