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Evspq1 - A Subtle Dagger
My first smallish-linear-style level. Q1 single player. More to come from me in the future.

http://www.fileplanet.com/dl.aspx?sda/maps/evspq1.zip


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Moderator's Notice: due to lack of screens I'd add from the first glance at the map that this is an oldkool runic map made with speedrunning in mind. Looks like your average id level.
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Addendum To Moderator's Notice. 
Although the map was made by a great speedrunner and it was first posted on SDA it's not actually a speedrunning map. It's a single player map.

Don't let the fact that all speedrunners are evil and smell funny discourage you from giving Evan some feedback on his first map.

Sorry for the intrusion. I'll go back to cleaning out my rectum with your toothbrush now... 
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I'd add from the first glance at the map that this is a festering camel turd of a map. 
Sigh Well 
It'd be really helpful for everyone to have a couple of screens and a bit wider map' description done by author.

Sometimes it's hard to moderate ;) 
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Download link doesn't work for me 
Leviathan 
I had to click the link twice. The first time there was an error, but it worked the second time. 
Screenies + Mini-Review 
First, the screenies:
http://rpg.spawnpoint.org/images/blah/evspq1_1.jpg
http://rpg.spawnpoint.org/images/blah/evspq1_2.jpg
http://rpg.spawnpoint.org/images/blah/evspq1_3.jpg

And now the review, LvL style:
I played on skill 2 (hard), and completed the map in just under 10 minutes. The map was longer than I expected it to be, but it was also a lot easier. There were a few traps and suprises, but despite that I only needed to use one health pack. There are five secrets, of which I found none; though I did accidentally opened one, but it closed before I could get inside. Visuals ranged from mediocre to decent (see the shots -- I tried to take shots that represented the map), but were on average about the same as id maps. Lighting was extremely dark in a few spots, and one time I couldn't see that there were stairs to go up. Navigation was straightforward with some backtracking, but it was done well overall. There is one side area that you are required to visit, but other than that there are no route choices or non-linearity.

Overall, I thought it was worth getting, but it is fairly short and too easy (at least on hard skill). The author has a lot of potential, and I'm looking forward to EVSPQ2. 
Oh 
I should also mention that ammo is in short supply. I finished the map with 32 nails and my axe.

Also, I'd like to point out that although the level of detail is similar to id maps, the visuals are indeed different. And I don't just mean the detailing style. id maps usually have interesting and nice room design, and a good sense of proportion. This map uses a bit too much of the Big-Rectangular-Box room design style. 
Er... 
RPG... you said in one part of that review that the map was 10 mins long, which was longer than expected... and then later said it was too short...? make up your mind. 
Additional Information 
Thought I'd share a little more information about my level. It's your standard linear style runic level of fairly easy skill. There are five total secrets which can be found by watching this demo:

http://dynamic.gamespy.com/~sda/demo.pl?nightmare/ev1_203.dz

So is it a 'festering camel turd'? Well, it's not exactly oblivion.bsp but I wouldn't say it's a terrible map being my first piece of work. I tried to keep the level very neat and clean looking when it came to texture placement - architechture and map proportion is still something I'm working on. Thus the box look to the rooms.

I am currently working on EVSPQ2, which is in my opinion, a big improvement over part 1. It features a bigger and more curved design. I will have some screen shots up of part 2 as soon as I find a place to host them.

I appreciate the helpful feedback so far everyone :) 
Nice Map 
gameplay-wise. The end-battle was an easy and fun exercise in starting monster in-fighting.

Visually, the architecture is nice but lighting is way too dark.

Technically, the map has surprisingly many leaks (FYI, entities like doors don't seal the map), is boxed and has only fast lighting (possibly fastvised also due to being boxed).

Also, you should check for items falling out of the map at load time. Move them to a better position or delete them altogether.

Looking forward to the next map! 
Scampie 
I dislike getting into semantics, I was misunderstood, so here goes.

Yes, the map is longer than I expected. Saying this is in reference to my own preconceived notions. There are plenty of speedmaps that have 50 monsters; and those are maps that don't have hoard combat. I think of a 50 monster map as being really quite short. This one is short, but not THAT short.

No, I did not say it was "too short." I said it was "fairly short." Again, semantics. You interpretted my statement to mean something I did not intend. Note that I said this in the summary paragraph, and thus I was describing the general characteristics of the map.

Basically, I meant that it was shorter than most maps because it has about 50 monsters, but it was longer than most 50-monster maps are. Perhaps I should have just said, "it's small."

P.S. Yes, I already regret taking the flame bait. 
Compiling Tools 
Thanks aguirRe. And RPG for the screenshots and review.

I am a noob when it comes to bsp-technicality :) I am using the qbsp, light, vis (now rvis) that came with Qoole 2.50. Does anyone know where I could go to get the latest & greatest compiling tools? Thanks a lot. 
Re: Compiling Tools 
I assume windlash = Evan Wagner?

aguiRe develops some really great compiling tools. A lot of people here use them. His site is here: http://user.tninet.se/~xir870k 
Re: Compiling Tools 
Thank you. And your assumption was correct also. 
Er.. 
that wasn't flame bait RPG... 10 mins is a fairly decent length for a map IMO. It just seemed strange to me that you would call it 10 mins long, then say it was short. 
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