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Proof-reading and unfiltered thoughts, mostly sequential I hope:
It's httpS://www.quaddicted.com/ , if you link to http you just make it take longer as it redirects. :)
I'd rather link
https://www.quaddicted.com/reviews/random_recommendations.php than the single random map redirect. This one is limited to well rated maps while the single one is truly random.
"Click on Maps in the top menu.", I'd make Maps a link.
"Nice (4) and Excellent (5) results." -> "Nice (4 hearts) and Excellent (5 hearts) results." maybe?
"Once you have downloaded a level, it needs to installed correctly to be able to load it in the game.", I'd drop the last part. -> "Once you have downloaded a level, it needs to installed correctly."
Step 0 in Installation could be "look if there is a text file and if so, read it".
"It only needs to be copied (or extracted directly) into the" -> "This file only needs to be put into the"
"you will need to create the directory manually" -> "you will need to create this directory manually"
'simple' is a bad word but I have no better idea myself. Maybe 'plain'?
I'd add examples for the console commands and parameters: "skill 1", "map 768_negke", "-game honey".
You sometimes use "folder" and sometimes "directory". Directory would be correct but for Windows people understand folder better I'd guess. Minor nitpick. :)
"Source port" is a doomism, please help eradicate the internet of it!
Java: The security issues are for when it is set to run automatically in the browser. Maybe add "If you are worried about security issues, just make sure your browser does not automatically execute Java applets on websites."? People should not be afraid of Java. :(
httpS://www.java.com/en/ ;)
"and download latest version." -> "and download the latest version."
I think there is a
.bat file included in the QI zip, not sure why but I guess that is what Windows users should run.
"JAR files with Java.)" there is a trailing parenthesis with no opening counterpart.
On the first run the QI will prompt the user to go to the configuration by itself.
Maybe link to JohnnyLaw's engine guide in the configuration paragraph?
The QI supports scanning the Quake dir for previously manually installed maps/mods with varying success!
For winquake the parameter for memory is -winmem XX (XX = MB!) from what I remember.
Maybe add a note about support at Quaddicted? We are not perfect and some packages will probably fail when installed with the QI because we fucked up.
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Great work, thank so very much! bier_gut++;
I thought about adding a big download button as noobs might not realise they have to click on the zipname and honestly, it is kinda hidden in the table.